Free writing Halloween

This week it has been Halloween so we have done some free writing. This writing is  a work in progress so the punctuation and spelling might be bad. Just a random Halloween question... What did you dress up as for Halloween?

Characters so far
Jack the smart and strong main character.
Lachy The Sidekick of jack also gets scared easy. 

There's not  a lot of characters .

Enjoy the story.

The vampire is running as fast as he can trying to get may, Jack and Lachy “Run Screams Jack” But then May falls behind suddenly all you hear is blood splashing everywhere as May screams  The vampire licks his lips after a great feast “ Are we safe now whispers Lachy” “I think so whispers Jack” POOF! A PORTAL APPEARS!!!!!!!! “ Lets jump through Jack” After they jump through the portal the portal goes POOF! “WWWWWHEEEEERREEEEEEE AREEEEEE WWWWEEEEE GOIIIIIIIINNNNG Screams Lachy” “ POOF! A portal appears BANG! As jack fly’s into a dumpster Lachy Fly’s into a brick wall Then there in the real world or are they.