This week for writing we did explanations on a special place for our family. I think I have done great at this. Next time I need to make it with lots of punctuation. So here is what I did. First we had to think of a place, mine was Greymouth because I have lived here for my whole life. Then we had to write about it and here is some of mine.
My family love Greymouth because me and my brother were born here and my mum and dad loved that so much that’s why they think it is a special place. My grandma and granddad live here and also my other grandpa died here so this why Greymouth is special to me and my family.
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